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In this page, I introduced a change in the lines from the original fanfic, in which Twilight actually listens to Fluttershy's suggestion, but denies it. The following dialogue ensues:
"Um," said Fluttershy, raising a single demure hoof. "I was wondering if, um, maybe we should make absolutely sure that we're right before—"
"No time for that, Fluttershy!" said Twilight. "We need to burn the corruption out as fast as equinely possible!"
"I'm sure you're right," said Fluttershy, hanging her head.
"No, no, see!" I said, my eyes, going a bit wide. "Listen to your friend, Twilight!"
"Listen, Fake Celestia," said Twilight. "Fluttershy is one of my best friends, but everypony knows she folds like an origami box."
"I like origami boxes," admitted Fluttershy.
"See?" said Twilight.
And in my opinion, it was a bit... harsh, and not really in character, for Twilight to humiliate Fluttershy in front of the others like that. So I opted for a situation where the timid pony tries to warn others with a tiny, shy voice, and nopony listens to her (it happened in an actual episode, but which one? Can't remember). It's still hard for poor Fluttershy, but to me, it appeared more adequate.
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well Fluttershy knows what to do...., except the rest of the group